Wednesday, November 15, 2017

Heart's Power Comments

Rating: 5.0

Like a fiery light
many who have a heart,
and those who show it bright,
like a car that sparks at start,
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Joshua Nichols
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Rini Shibu 15 November 2017

sparks at start and power there after... Amazing

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 15 November 2017

A beautifully crafted write. Indeed, our innermost power comes from the heart.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 15 November 2017

like a car that sparks at start, power comes from the heart. A lovely poem with a good deal of rhyming. Thanks poet for the beautiful debut attempt. 10+++ for the sharing. Subhas

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Jazib Kamalvi 15 November 2017

A great start with a nice poem, Joshua. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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