Heartbreak Poem by ruhffa ruhffa

Heartbreak

Rating: 3.5


It aches..it shakes..it makes me feel
It hurts..it burns & makes me squeal
So easy to lie, so easy to fake?
tears are nothing to those stories ul make
Coz i know ur mind & i know ur heart
Sharpest glass & a piercing dart
& just once if u cud see my pain
Im dying out here..its crystal plain
And though it hurts and makes me cry
It mayb fate or mayb pie
Il stuff on it & choke on it
Just u see il gorge on it
& il still be der staring at u
As u walk away, coz dats just u
and once just once u turn back
watch me smack
that doubt in ur eyes
What u did...was it wise?

Sunday, May 17, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: heartache
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

It aches..it shakes..it makes me feel It hurts..it burns & makes me squeal Good depiction about heartbreaks of love

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Good depiction about heartbreaks of love

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Chinedu Dike 17 May 2015

The pains of heartbreak well depicted in the poem. A good piece of poetry nicely penned with lovely rhyme scheme. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON. ?9

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Kelly Kurt 17 May 2015

Interesting style and pure content. Thanks for sharing

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