Heartbreak Comments

Well expressed thoughts and feelings, very heartfelt with strong emotions. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched...........

Sir. Macbeth Malekutu please explain to me what this poem means. I have read it 30 times over and i can't grasp a story or even a pattern. It seems as though the writer (you) understands and intends it to be this way Yet with all these peices as the reader i cant build the puzzle, can you help me? im very curious.

It is an awesome poem. Not sure if it was intentional; But when attempting to get a closer look at your writing. It was a little difficult to analyse because of the bunched up sentences. line spacing and stanza separation can help you put emphasis on sentences; And better allow you to express your writings punctually to your readers. .

The pains of love. Beautifully penned