Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 685,446 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Heartless As Human - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

Imagination can travel any side
Go too far end and come back with insight
Not to touch any of the pathetic show
But to express only grief and sorrow

Language is no bar
The sky has his shining star
Moon may come and spread its light
Why at we feel bitterness to fight?

“Many readers try to comment”
I never feel bad or regret
“English is not your first language”
They may try to offend by such usage

I request them to read poem
It may show them good turn
There is lot more to pick and understand
World has come closer to find friends

If eyes can speak then why blame?
Why we fail to share the shame?
Why do we pretend to be knowledgeable?
When subject is so vast and unmanageable

The tears and pain can well be felt equally
Its impact on rich and poor is same really
What do you want to know by use of perfect expression?
If that can not bring any kind of satisfaction

Leave aside richness of first language
Also ignore the grammar and it usage
Even though it may look nice like beautiful woman
But may seem to be heartless as human


Comments about Heartless As Human by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/10/2014 6:37:00 PM)

    Gibz Rising likes this.

    Hasmukh Mehta welcome
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/10/2014 5:24:00 PM)

    So wonderful


    krishna Middela11 minutes ago
    We express our views, though they understand, some are keen to observe the grammar.after english is not my mother tongue.neither they know my mother tongue to share.
    Let beauty of expression be appreciated.
    But your grammar is perfect.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/10/2014 5:24:00 PM)

    Excellent


    Greg Obrecht12 minutes ago
    This. Is. Awesome.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/10/2014 5:20:00 PM)

    Inspirational

    Abbey Gillespie17 minutes ago
    You really inspire people with your creative mind. Keep writing
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/10/2014 5:19:00 PM)

    very nice

    DAVID MACON17 minutes ago
    I like the way you brought a thought to light, good flow
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/10/2014 4:07:00 PM)

    Ok


    Angela Newton9 minutes ago
    I don't understand it.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/10/2014 3:40:00 PM)

    Imagination can travel any side
    Go too far end and come back with insight
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Poem Submitted: Friday, January 10, 2014

Poem Edited: Saturday, January 11, 2014


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