Tuesday, May 19, 2009

Heaven And Earth Comments

Rating: 5.0

when heaven and earth i can no longer see
my GOD will be in front of me.
and when my GOD says it's time to die
i know that he'll be by my side.
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louis rams
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Matt Mooney 09 September 2009

The idea of heaven is to earth as crops are to the soil is a beautiful and simple view of life. To one like myself who did alot of deaming about life as a boy at work in the tillage fields that line gives great depth and meaning to the poem for me.

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Sandra Fowler 22 May 2009

Very thought provoking. God is certainly everywhere. But I do believe that it gets better farther on. My heart tells me so, 10 for you, Louis. Kind regards, Sandra

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Kranthi Pothineni 21 May 2009

Enjoyed the read very well. Its really good one. The flow is really nice.10.

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the absolute truth...heaven is here..a step away...lovely poem sir

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