House we name for structure
Used for purpose to live in there
It may have spacious lawns
And owner to own
It may be ideal
Loosing grand and real
But no life or soul
As it responds no live call
Yes elegant show is from outside
Big rooms and dining hall to divide
But no human beings to adore
It is vacant and occupied no more
It can be made real home
With cheerfulness and welcome
Wife is occupant and looking after place
Even if hat is small, it is more than palace
House is made with bricks and layers
Home we make with good treatment to offer
The guests and relatives visit with happiness
We too feel great and get shine on face
Children play here and there
Parents are there to look after
Take care and nourish with affection
Home is really heaven for relation
home Beth Cloninger3 minutes ago I wasn't really sure what the poem was about. I pictured a vacant home a family once shared but then I wasn't sure there at the end.
Good idea Hunter Hansen2 minutes ago I like the idea for the poem but it just didn't work for me. Sorry Comment +1
Nice B T1 minute ago You miss some words, which really deflated it for me Comment +1
i like Kelly Davis4 minutes ago u got skill Comment +1
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House we name for structure Used for purpose to live in there