Heed To An Advice Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Heed To An Advice

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Never turn blind to advice,
Not because you are novice,
But all the need doesn‘t suffice,
So no tag or free without price,

Sometimes it may spring great surprise,
Pave the way for sudden rise,
May just save you from sudden demise,
All with earnest desire with no promise,

It is in best tradition and in interest,
Unwanted things stop with timely arrest,
Achievement of things with opportunity rarest,
Arrival of guests considered as dearest,

People may not take and not like,
Lazy in buying with sudden price hike,
It may not be proper to ride on bike,
But advice if comes mind must strike,

It is just free and for asking,
With open face and without masking,
If pointed out not to smoke?
Need not take it as simple joke,

Stature is attained with time passage,
Able to judge and pass on the message,
Not useless things but many usages,
Time and place change but not ages.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Radha Seth 24 August 2009

Sometimes it may spring great surprise, Pave the way for sudden rise, May just save you from sudden demise.....10

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Saroj Davde 24 August 2009

Never turn blind to advice, Not because you are novice, .....10

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Reshma Punjabi 24 August 2009

It is just free and for asking, With open face and without masking, ....10

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Poonam Suthar 24 August 2009

It is in best tradition and in interest, Unwanted things stop with timely arrest, ......10

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Indani Narayan 14 August 2009

pay attn to advise....10

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Sachin Goswami 18 October 2009

Never turn blind to advice, Not because you are novice, But all the need doesn‘t suffice, So no tag or free without price,

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Darshna Chopra 18 September 2009

Never turn blind to advice, Not because you are novice, But all the need doesn‘t suffice

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Severina Dsouza 17 September 2009

Never turn blind to advice, Not because you are novice, But all the need doesn‘t suffice, So no tag or free without price,

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Umesh Lalvani 29 August 2009

Never turn blind to advice, Not because you are novice, But all the need doesn‘t suffice, ...............10

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Chetna Purohit 29 August 2009

But all the need doesn‘t suffice, So no tag or free without price, ........10

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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