Christopher Cariad

Rookie - 473 Points (June 10,1989 - Present / Paducah, Ky USA)

Hell's Feast - Poem by Christopher Cariad

This Hell that I'm falling in, is ever so changing.
From a little spark in the darkness to the flames a raging.
The fire ever so high, I'm sinking fast in this darkness.
I look up to the sky and see the face of saving.
Quickly my head turns away, not wanting him to see me.
Asking for forgiveness, as the light comes closer.
The darkness fleeing from his tears,
I started to praise God for the life he gave and for this eternal soul.
His presence turning away, I cried out for his forgiveness
Laying there to cry as the darkness overwhelmed me,
The home I wished for is now gone and forever
I'll be crying in this fiery hole
Where I lay and wait for someone to save my soul.

Topic(s) of this poem: faith


Comments about Hell's Feast by Christopher Cariad

  • Romeo Della Valle (4/11/2012 7:07:00 PM)


    There is always light at the end of the tunnel, Chris! This, your first write clearly shows your deep feelings and potential in the Poetry World! You have made the first and best decision in your life in order to come out of that dark world you are living in! Congratulation and WELCOME to the Poetry World! Thank you for sharing and keep it up! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, April 11, 2012

Poem Edited: Tuesday, March 4, 2014


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