Friday, July 31, 2009

* Help Me Escape From This Pain! * Comments

Rating: 2.8

Can't stop these horrible tears of sorrow.
They just escape and fall in despair.
The sorrow burns deep within like liquid fire.
Why do u contine to leave me in such a state?
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Black Rose Night
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Jazib Kamalvi 27 March 2018

A nice poetic imagination, B. R. N. You may like to read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks

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Darkness J 12 August 2009

Well written poem! I know that feeling, such an awful one. But no worry time heals the wounds.

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Milica Franchi De Luri 03 August 2009

Time is the best doctor...........in time pain will fade away.........nothing else can kill it. I like your poem. Its' nicely written, Milica

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