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Her Body Print On Sand

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Painted in evening colours,
The sky glowed,
In an array of orange shades
And the rays sparkled,
Through every wave and wavelet,
That hugged the shore.
Over the sand, she ran,
Stamping little wavelets.
Tiny droplets from sky,
Softly hit her skin,
Washing off all barriers
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William Jackson 14 March 2006
Roopa, I like the crisp images expressed in your poem 'Her Body Print on Sand' and the way you stick up for her right to express herself completely in a world of men who shamefully may not value her opinion. I like the whole idea of a body print in the sand. We do not get much snow down here where I live, and so body prints in the sand are the closest we ever get to making snow angels.
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Martin A. Ramos 26 January 2006
Very visual, even sensual. Makes one think. Good work. Martin
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Nimal Dunuhinga 26 January 2006
Excellent! Roopa, regrets on the sand soon the waves take off? A very touching poem..................
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