To Those Who Love Me Poem by Roopa Menon

To Those Who Love Me

Rating: 4.8


Brown, yucky and tasteless
Toxic monsters
All tightly bundled
Into a thin roll.
That's me!
Slim and handy
As I squeeze in between
Your fingers.
Burning my tail,
I turn into ashes and smoke
Surging my way
Through your mouth
To reach your lungs
Blocking arteries and veins on my way.
I hypnotize your cells
And they go dividing and dividing
Turning your lungs
Into a cancerous demon.
My dear children
Nicotine and tobacco-tar
Slowly eating you up,
Immersing you in their toxic bliss.
And you still enjoy me!
A tap on my back
Flicking off the ashes
As you smoke
I gleefully enter through the tiny hairs in
The tiny nostrils of
Your tiny little kids
B'cos blocking arteries
Is what I do
Whether its you or
People around you
What we share
Happens to be parasitism.
You burn me
And I burn your life.

I am burnt out now
Only the butt remains.
Throw me before I burn you.
And here you go
Lighting another me

I guess perhaps,
I am dearer
Than your family and your life.
But mind the spark in the butt
It's the spark of your life
Breathing and flickering now,
But...........................

As I come to you again
I carry an expiry date
Certainly not mine.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Charles Chaim Wax 01 February 2006

a wise and compassionate poem telling a truth which must be told and here the images burning and fierce a fine poem

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William Jackson 14 March 2006

This should be required reading for every twelve year old who is thinking about starting to smoke. Well said, Roopa! Excellent images and a timely topic. Fine poem.

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nice selection of subject Roopa.

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Lee Degnan 21 November 2006

I loved this, Roopa... even if I am a smoker (hides face!) I agree with WJ, it really should be required reading! ! Peace, Lee

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Unnikrishnan E S 01 June 2021

A very pointed write, equally Sharp as it is. The poet wields her proverbial pen against the menace of tobacco. Wonderfully accurate and penetratingly powerful. Loved it. Full score

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Bharati Nayak 31 May 2021

'I am burnt out now Only the remains. Throw me before I burn you. And here you go Lighting another me'---An excellent poem about smoking.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 31 May 2021

A wonderful poem! Appreciated...5 stars

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Dr Dillip K Swain 31 May 2021

A magnificent poem! I'm happy to see you here as a popular poet. Congrats! !

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Sallie Howson 29 May 2009

excellent..well done

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Roopa Menon

Roopa Menon

Mumbai, India
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