iron panda 23

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Her Heart - Poem by iron panda 23

Her heart, it beats, it feels a feeling
that hasn’t been felt
in a long time
she doesn’t want it to leave
but stay, for this long time

Her heart, it beats, it feels a feeling
but it kind of hurts
alone? So sad
all she wants
is for this to last
and not end up like
moldy food in the trash

Her heart, it beats
it feels like it may
be cared for?
Where is the key?
she wants to know
if its safe
Or has it decided to go

Her heart, it beats
but why beginning to
fill with sorrow?
its confused,
these emotions
just the answers to her questions
is all they want to know

Her heart, it beats
and she’s just tryin to
keep it safe
her heart is connected to her mind
and they both wanna know…..
will everthing turn out ok?


Comments about Her Heart by iron panda 23

  • (5/20/2010 4:15:00 AM)

    Wow! ! I love it! ! <3<3 (Report) Reply

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  • (5/16/2010 11:25:00 PM)

    I just LOVE that poem! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • (4/28/2010 12:07:00 PM)

    wow my heart beats by this poem and your art of defining emotions
    really nice written poem
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  • John Knight (4/23/2010 12:36:00 PM)

    Hi Panda - Lovely Poem - thanks for sharing - As long as your heart is beating there is hope! ! ! Verses One to Four: A feeling - hurts - alone - cared for? - where is the key - sorrow - confusion - emotion - Why all the angst? ? ? ? Verse Five - Always connect your heart to your mind Angel - especially in the sphere of LOVE. Because you are so lovely EVERYTHING WILL TURN OUT OK - ESPECIALLY FOR YOU. Love throgh poetry - JOHN (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, April 23, 2010

Poem Edited: Monday, November 8, 2010

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