Her Smile Poem by joshua reid

Her Smile

Rating: 3.5


her smile is like an angels wings
flapping while the angel sings
her smile will always show
watching your love continue to grow
her smile is worth a lifetime to see
even if its not cause of me
her smile has given a lot of care
just because it was there
her smile fills you with the ambition
to make her joy your mission
her smile will leave you hallucinating
knowing that you and her should be dating
her smile can cause so much pain
since you might not see it again
her smile is kind of like your smile
but i don't know i haven't seen it in a while

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Silence Dogood 13 September 2008

A lovely poem again I like the ending great job :)

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Katherine Ng Li Hoon 16 August 2008

A beautiful smile from this lovely lady will always be there and lives in your memory and heart.Iam impress by your poem! Good Work!

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Gayatri Nambiar 11 August 2008

smile beautifully...from heart... no pain at the end. a lovely write

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Tanya Stanford 11 August 2008

You really do capture the feelings so effortlessly in your words. Lovely work. Thanks for sharing it.

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