Her Visiting Poem by Naima Ali

Her Visiting

Rating: 5.0


I saw her
Came to this fair,
The fair got arranged with necessary things
And for a time
She observed, purchased,
Accompanied and enjoyed
Then left it,
And now she is no more,
To me she is a memory
Soon, I will follow her
Then no one will bear
And look for.

Thursday, March 29, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: observation
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Subhas Chandra Chakra 29 March 2018

The span of her life is like faring through a market place. A lovely way of presenting a nice poem.

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Muzahidul Reza 29 March 2018

A significant poem, sounds wisely and philosophically penned, vote for it is full + 10 You may read my poems, thank you for this great spiritual poem, Her Visiting

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Sima Sarma 03 August 2019

Sounds Philosophical, wonderful

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Offeliya Seema 01 April 2018

And now she is no more, To me she is a memory Soon, I will follow her Then no one will bear And look for. , , , , your hand in writing will be great, come on, Naima, put your done, thanks

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Offeliya Seema 01 April 2018

it is a great philosophical and spiritual poem, thanks for thai great share,10, you may read my poems

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You Again 14 May 2018

Cancer spreading through this site.

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Fiadh Fida 30 March 2018

She visits the fair / earth does her purpose and died / leaves the earth, wonderful spiritual and philosophical, loved and listed, thanks poetess

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Naila Rais 29 March 2018

Such a nice write.... Many more will flow.... I would like you read my poem LET ME RISE and In the mid of the night.... Naila 😃😃👍👍

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Mark Yourself 14 May 2018

What a hypocrite. No morals. I pity all those who love you, if any.

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