Her Whiskey Mind Poem by Rohma safi
Her Whiskey Mind
Everything is going right
Then why tears in her eyes
She wants to be the sky
Everyone is now happy
Why the deep wounds in her heart
She wants to be the light
Why her soul is so anxious
When god gives her peace
A fire burns her peace
She wants to be the deep
She heard noises in every breath
The noises of her thoughts
Which are bottled in her tears
Everything is going right
Then why tears in her eyes
A good start with a nice poem, Rohma. Read my poem Love and L u s t. Thanks.
Perhaps she loves deeply her parents, friends, and acquaintances, but she is not getting back the same deep love in return. She feels lonely and needs more attention and love. Whatever it may but she has nicely penned his sentiments and feelings in a wonderful poem. I congratulate her for writing and sharing such an amazing poem.
Well articulated and nicely brought forth with insight. Deep feelings of sadness that accompanies loneliness is aptly captured in the poem. Thanks for sharing Rohma.
If everything is going right, the tears in her eyes must be tears of happiness! Welcome to Poem Hunter!
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A fire burns her peace She wants to be the deep She heard noises in every breath The noises of her thoughts. beautiful. picturing the pain and struggle of loneliness. thank u dear poetess. tony