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Hi! Lovely Parrots Fly In The Heart Of A Handsome Hunk In Love Mania (Syllabic Light Verse)

Rating: 5.0

Oh my
LOVE deity,
Rock my world with beauty:
Your comely figure with imp-thin
Wasp waisted body in sleek apricot
Skin while strands of russet brown tumbling hair lands on
Arched neck, frames your slavic face, gives me a kick! Take
My life with your fleek galaxy lemur
Blue round eyes, burns with hypnotic
passion makes me getting

off on, in the
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Wednesday, May 13, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: beautiful,beauty,character,charm,girlfriend,heart,love,metaphor,rhyme,romance
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Me Poet Yeps Poet 22 May 2020

2.Your three poems I have condensed hoping you will friendship cement You are a young man standing at the threshold of time AND I am about to ring the bell till it chimes For whom does the bell toll now who can tell ye smoulder with hypnotic passion and me getting off your thighs, glide to the end where two teak tall trees, live as wind blows! I bow down to your beauty

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 22 May 2020

1.Wasp waist body in sleek apricot lemur blue round eyes, VERY METAPHORICAL POETRY MY SIX PLUS DECADES HAS TAUGHT ME LOVE WHEN IT IS DESIRED MOST BUT IS NAUGHT metaphorically.

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Vaibhav Simha 17 May 2020

Yet again a ravishing take on rhyme. I must say, I'm more intrigued by the rhythmic paradigm in your poems than the words themselves. You can be a wonderful songster.

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Harindhar Reddy 18 May 2020

Thank you for your amazing comment ????????

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A fascinating poem. Lovely and wonderful attributes of a beloved. Beautifully crafted with a lively flow.

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Harindhar Reddy 18 May 2020

I'm glad for your graceful review on the poem ????????

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Mahtab Bangalee 13 May 2020

beauty amazonian; kite of heart flying reel on the kissing lips for the entire life amorous fire with no death

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Harindhar Reddy 18 May 2020

Yup dear friend I do like to quote Keats " a thing of beauty is joy for ever"

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