Tuesday, October 24, 2006

Hidden Emphasis - Acrostic Sonnet – Ideogram Images Comments

Rating: 2.8

Incorporating verse in gilded frame
Does not, as such, suffice, - vice to conform.
Each should follow conscience, - smile, rile, charm, scorn,
Open communication’s blinds. The aim: -
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Jonathan ROBIN
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Georgios Venetopoulos 21 May 2015

You have managed well with the counting of syllables but your Iamb presents some inconsistencies.

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