Hide And Seek Poem by Mahfooz Ali

Hide And Seek

Rating: 5.0


Why playing the game of hide n seeks?
Come, come, come,
Come and talk to me directly.
What do you want?
I m fed up of all these mental bully…..

After seeing the message of
‘Chalo shuru ho jayen’
I am embroiled in folly.

Now, I want to end this
Game of
Hide and seek,
Not to make the future bleak.

I loved you and in all,
But
After all efforts,
But got fall.

I want to get over
From all this shits,
Finally here,
From getting all this pits.

Let me forget you,
If nothing would materialize,
Let me be myself
And be yourself
To realize.

Please don’t make me feel guilty,
I want final talk now,
To be live in reality.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 05 October 2010

Bully [as adjective] is occult Love …hide and seek [noetic] ripens love Fiancée is not bullying but using bully hide and seek Very good emotion…enjoyed… thanks for sharing Hon’ble Poet Mahfooz Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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Kavya Manjusha 14 August 2009

Very nice, Emotion is clear, simple, direct and pure.... I liked it... keep up the good work.. 'ada'

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Carmen Johnson 01 April 2009

I like it. Often in the game of love, it is nothing but at game of hide and seek. But often those we seek, are hiding from us. Or we are hiding from those that seek us. Each too afraid to be visible in the open, for fear of being hurt. I really liked the meaning in the words you wrote. The feeling. Good write.

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Lovleen Walia 14 December 2008

really a gud job sir....keep it up...

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