Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 385,581 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Hide Nothing Even - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

Hide nothing

My eyes stare in vacumme
And try to find volume
But get back soon
In finding failure for moon

I am caught
While thinking right
Anybody can make out
What was I thinking at that?

Yes. They go from top to bottom
Survey the full object and a fail seldom
Mind gets bogged down
If something comes up before vision

Not goo looking females alone
But flowers fully grown
With petals making an appeal
It attracts in real

Do not blame person
Or eyes in good seasons
It is natural with any men
To look at and hide nothing even

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/17/2016 4:44:00 AM)


    welcome Lopamudra Mishra and Hemant Kumar like this. Unlike · Reply · 1 · Just now
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  • (1/16/2016 10:47:00 PM)


    Beautiful poems depicting human weaknesses and advocating their acceptance with open mind. Thanks for sharing.10 points. (Report) Reply

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/16/2016 8:47:00 PM)


    welcome Kunnathuveettilravindranath, Unlike · Reply · 1 · Just now
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/16/2016 8:47:00 PM)


    welcome Roshel Mery and Helen Comaling like this. Unlike · Reply · 1 · Just now
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/16/2016 8:47:00 PM)


    welcome Nel Pasayon Acido Dayo, Unlike · Reply · 1 · Just now
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/16/2016 8:36:00 PM)


    Do not blame person
    Or eyes in good seasons
    It is natural with any men
    To look at and hide nothing even
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Poem Submitted: Saturday, January 16, 2016



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