Him Poem by Writing Tales

Him

Rating: 5.0


Yes, I love him
his personality, his charm
the way he talks,
the way he smiles, the way he looks at me, the way he comforts me
but I don't deserve him, his love, even his friendship.
This is the first time I feel like this.
Am I in love?
I did something to get your attention without knowing a girl was waiting for you,
without knowing your heart is full of love for her.
I opened my windows only because I could see you.
When you go to work, I watch you through my windows with a silent prayer on my lips,
"Please don't look back". I was scared that you would know my feelings.
I waited for you to see you return home; when I saw you, I suddenly closed the curtains
because I didn't want to let you know about my feelings. Even now, I am waiting for you.
I read our chats; there is nothing special, but that makes me smile.
I don't know how to describe this feeling. Is it love or a crush?
Maybe you have some misunderstandings about me, but I know you will not ask me about
them because you don't have anything. I don't think you care about me, but that's fine because
you have to be loyal to your girl.

Him
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This is my first writing.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 12 September 2024

Nicely brought forth from the inner recesses of the heart. A beautiful love poem

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Durr e Nayab Malik 09 September 2024

Do don't know but it fits well.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 09 September 2024

WELCOME to POEM HUNTER POETRY SITE, Dear Poetess!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 09 September 2024

WOW! FIRST writing, and you have got the accolade chosen by Poem Hunter and Team as The Member Poem Of The Day (TMPOTD) TOP Marks for your creative write and very attractive issue. CONGRATULATIONS!

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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon 09 September 2024

Congratulations on this poem having been selected as the Poem Of The Day. Good one. Top score

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