Guarded Heart

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Hit Me Again - Poem by Guarded Heart

You think its ok
To abuse me in this way
Something about your legal rights
Makes it ok to make me cry at night
You don't like that i fight back
I don't think you should hit me like that
As you tell you did nothing wrong
Go ahead and blame me, its all my fault
My expression doesn't change
As the silent tears caress my face
Roll down my cheeks onto my chest
You want a response, its only a test
Stop trying to make a show
Of some false affection that has no hold
Your arrogance has proven to bold
And though i may not have told a soul
Next time you try, the next morning i'll be gone


Comments about Hit Me Again by Guarded Heart

  • (3/9/2008 1:02:00 PM)


    holy shit, very powerful, huge subject, and you even had the rhyming form to boot. very well put, but will you leave him or her? (Report) Reply

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  • (5/3/2006 3:16:00 PM)


    If you leave, you always have a place to stay (Report) Reply

  • (5/3/2006 9:12:00 AM)


    ....you know........i went through the same thing..and after all i realize that their is nothing you can truly do...but hold you head up high because they cannot take away your dignity and they see that...so they want to destroy you because they can.....but time is the killer but your hero aswell (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, May 3, 2006



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