When you hold my hand in yours
It makes me feel so secure
Put your arm around my shoulders
I can feel your warmth fill me
You make me feel I am adored
And that makes me feel wonderful
Such a sweet poem Chiffon...lovely to read...thank you...10++
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Using only six lines, Chiffie, you have said what it takes some 20 to 30 lines to say, and not quite effectively as you did in this fine, brief poem. You have vividly expressed what the security of being loved feels like, and there isn't quite another feeling just like it. Your word selection and phrasing in this charming poem was very well done. Carl.