Hop Scotch Poem by Heather Burns

Hop Scotch

Rating: 3.3


Yesterday
we painted
hop scotch
on the sidewalk

Now it's painted
on the sidewalk
of my heart.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khairul Ahsan 14 March 2015

A wonderful short poem with long memories. Loved it. Also appreciate the comment of poet Akhtar Jawad- very nicely said!

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Akhtar Jawad 03 July 2014

To me it seems as a memory of an act of childhood, an innocent lovely game that could not be forgotten, due to some very special reason, may be due to a love affair initiated in those games or because the game is now played by one's children. Such likings have a deep root.

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Wahab Abdul 14 June 2013

this is your first post on 8/8 /2010 here along with your other four poems, i am glad to comment first..on a poem which is too romantic and soft..

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