Hoping, One Day Poem by Sara Panicali

Hoping, One Day

Rating: 4.1


</>I sit here alone
all by myself
hoping one day you'll realize
how badly I need you
and how much I still love you
til this day

I sit here alone thinking of you
how I keep trying to reach out
and express that I can't keep doing this
and hoping one day soon
you will reach out and help
before it's to late

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dwayne Banks 12 April 2012

from the heart...again, writing is our way of expression...I say Good!

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Abdallah Gamal 07 November 2011

Outstanding! Lovely poem expresses the loyalty to the beloved, perfect :)

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Adeline Foster 06 November 2011

Ah. It is time to let go; of course only if you need the auro of despair to write like this. Try a lifting one before you spoil it all. Read mine - Despair - Adeline

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Cosmic Dreamer 03 November 2011

Hope is man's only dream... Nice Poem...

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