Horizon Poem by john tiong chunghoo

Horizon

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the sea and the sky
hold onto each other
only the horizon knows
the distance between their longings
- echoed over and over
in a restless mass of
tide cresting between
anxious heave of hope
and the tremulous sigh of anguish

second version

the sea and the sky
share one heart
only the horizon
knows the distance
between their longings
- echoed over and over
beyond a restless mass of
tide cresting between
the anxious heave of hope
and the tremulous
sigh of anguish

final version

the sea and the sky
share one heart
lip to lip in an embrace
spread out over the horizon
the distance of their longing is
echoed over and over
in a restless mass of tide
cresting between
anxious hints of hope
and the tremulous sighs
of anguish

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
H K 22 August 2008

Fantastic poem......as though I felt the words flowing with imagery....Love this write!

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john tiong chunghoo

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Sibu, Sarawak, Borneo East Malaysia
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