Horse In A Field (Haiku) Poem by Spock the Vegan

Horse In A Field (Haiku)

Rating: 5.0


Horse drinking water
From a barrel in the field
Swishing flies with tail

Horse In A Field (Haiku)
Thursday, December 24, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: bugs,drinking,horse,nature
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A sight I saw when growing up.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Spock The Vegan 06 February 2016

Thank you both for your kind words.

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Bri Edwards 26 January 2016

ah, contentment! ================================ an update on ME: Still Not Blind, But Still Not Back To The ‘Showcase’-mastering! ….. [hiya everybody (well about 35 of my PH friends at least) : my eye condition is improving] Perhaps the good wishes and (even) prayers of some of you ….. have caused my left eye to be “better”, but still not “true”. The doctor says: “Come see me again in six more weeks”, but for now my ‘caretaker’ still [lovingly] seeks ….. to have me rest my eye(s) . But she’s let me type quite a few …. of some months-old poems which to you will be new. I’ve not got them into PH yet, and it may still be a while, …. but I’m sure you’ll all survive without them, though it may be a ‘trial’ ……………….for you! In the meantime, if anyone feels like trying to “fill my shoes”, …………. send me a note and, if I see the note I’ll not (you) abuse. I hope all is well with you and “yours”. [Happy Valentines Day to all the ‘girls’.] For now I spend my days gazing in my mirror ……and growing MY curls. (January 25th,2016) p.s. I’ve been away from PH for a month, and also limited my other computer activity. So, if anyone has sent a message or poem comment, thanks, but I haven’t read any recently and don’t know if I’ll answer them the way I used to (for a month or so perhaps) . bri :) :)

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Kelly Kurt 24 December 2015

An expertly crafted haiku, Spock.

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