Hot Summers Poem by Carolyn Brunelle

Hot Summers

Rating: 5.0


The whirring blades
of an old ceiling fan
brings soothing night air
to my easy chair...
and thoughts of them.

In moonlit fields
of the mind,
two young lovers,
in a blur of emotions
trying to cool down
the heat of passion.

Warm memories,
other cool comforts,
come smiling back
from younger days;
other hot summers.

Wednesday, July 2, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: soothing
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bonnie Collins 03 July 2008

Oh this is so very well written, short, but filled with so much imagery that opens the soul to a time in life when summer was a time for not only the heat of night, but the heat of young passion! ! Very sweet! ! !

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Mamta Agarwal 02 July 2008

sensous, evocative, contrasting images- well crafted, very graphic 10

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