Wednesday, June 3, 2015


You made me feel that you are perfect,
You said a treasure that I have to protect.
Someone that I can't reject,
Because you said, losing you will be my regret.

I feel stupid for believing you,
And feel dumb for loving you.
How can this be easy for you,
For leaving me after I have fallen for you.

How could you do this to me,
You made me believe that you really love me.
And then one day you set me free,
Like nothing has happened between you and me.

You said you still love her,
That girl who is absolutely prettier.
Maybe she is so much better,
And I can't help but to feel bitter.

What about the plans we made together?
The dreams we're supposed to build together?
Your promises about forever?
What happened to your love that didn't last longer?
Jessica Subang
Topic(s) of this poem: forget,love and pain
I didn’t expect that his reply can make my world apart. I didn’t know that his reply can break my heart into pieces. I didn’t know that everything we have done together can be ended with his reply. This is what he has said, “Bumabalik kasi yung ex ko at na-realize kong minamahal ko pa pala sya.”
Those words I know I’ll never forget. Those words that ended the memories we have made together. Those words that made me feel that I am nothing compared to his ex.
Thats very well said...after failing in love i too felt it as the business of loss...
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Allotey Abossey 03 June 2015
Your poems are biut'fully emotional and emotionally biut'ful. You write well Jessy and I love it. But as my friend said and I have also commented on ur other poem, move on. Some people come into our lives to make us wiser for the bigger things tomorrow. I think they are blessings in disguise. God bless you
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Thank you so much for loving my poems. Everything I wrote was all came from my heart. This is the only way I know to escape the pain. By the way, I'm looking forward on reading of your works too.
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Fabrizio Frosini 03 June 2015
Dear Jessica, your 3 poems here have got the same subject -and everybody can understand the reason, of course-, indeed they are well penned. But now you have to go on.. Write about your 'Universe': your 'Inner Universe' is filled with light.. I'm sure.. A big 'Ciao' from Italy Fabrizio
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Thank you for reading my poems Fabrizio. And thank you for appreciating all of it. I am looking forward of reading yours too!
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