How Long? How Far? Poem by Anne Yun

How Long? How Far?

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How long is your 'no longer'?
can it be far as my 'never'?

I know not any answer
maybe one year, or another

I wish upon a star
that you were not my scar

And i wish it over and over
till it becomes a real ever

Friday, June 17, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: question
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daniel Brick 15 April 2017

How far refers to space; how long to time. And we humans live in space and time. Those things define both our natural limittations and also our equally potentials. Your poem doesn't try to resolve this issue. I sense a patient but expectant waiting id thr proper response.

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Kim Barney 17 June 2016

I like it. Short, sweet, and enigmatic.

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