How The Time Flew Poem by Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh

How The Time Flew

Rating: 5.0


Captivated by her
On a fine day
I longed to write a poem
On her beauty.
Yet how long
I was trying,
One day
I saw her withering.
I did not feel it
But
How fast
The time flew
And how strong
Its current
Today
I am becoming old.
But the poem
I have not written.

Friday, April 8, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: beauty,poetic expression
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 08 April 2016

Today i am becoming old. Nice work.

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Good effort. Keep trying.

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Loke Kok Yee 09 April 2016

never too old when it comes to writing poetry and what more when it's about a beauty! thanks Akham

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Ramesh Rai 21 April 2016

Time and tide wait for no man. Everything is being flown in the wave of time. Master piece.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 23 June 2020

A sweet poem! Captivating poetic expression...loved reading it. Top score!

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Cigeng Zhang 08 July 2016

Time is gone. But there is always something precious that stays in life forever. Good work.

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Nosheen Irfan 11 June 2016

Time flies. Old age is the autumn of life. A very profound piece.

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Randhir Kaur 13 May 2016

Yeah...old is gold...well written..nice work

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Akhtar Jawad 11 May 2016

An amazing poem, I liked it so much, specially the lines- - - But the poem I have not written.

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