Change Poem by Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh

Change

Rating: 4.5


Some started running,
All running in a frenzy.
Yet non asked why.

Saturday, December 26, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: change
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Cynthia Buhain-baello 18 February 2016

Interesting flow of action in this concise poem, with images of running without reason. The title could be Chaos instead of Change because change is done for a reason and with a direction.

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Running without reason they are proud to call it Change so I put the title like this.Thanks so much.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 25 February 2018

An amazing little Haiku! The great question mark is still unanswered! Beautiful...Thanks for sharing....10

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Dr Antony Theodore 02 January 2016

Yet non asked why. you have powerfully depicted in short verse, the mass movement, and the senselessness of mass behaviour. thank you dear poet. tony

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Anil Kumar Panda 01 January 2016

Yeah, we all chasing after a mirage. Very nice.

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Richard Wlodarski 04 June 2026

Upon second reading, your poem is even more powerful today! Not asking why can be very dangerous when the world's most powerful leaders are ruling over blindness with blindfolds!

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Dr Antony Theodore 25 December 2018

Yet non asked why. The meaninglessness of our own actions........very well portrayed. tony

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Kumarmani Mahakul 02 November 2018

A true picture on changes has been astutely painted. A beautiful poem so nicely executed. Thanks for sharing.

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Rajnish Manga 31 October 2018

A nice satire on the present state of society- everybody running after mirages.

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Dr Antony Theodore 17 September 2018

portraing the human character in the society in which we live. a very fine poem in short verses.. tony

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