The door
You did not know
I opened to you
During the cyclone
When you and I
In the open
Endured its ferocity.
Far away from you
In solitude
I opened it
And beckoned you.
Interesting writing that leaves much open to interpretation. I like that. I like the repeated use of the word open in various forms. Well done. I could interpret it as a couple going through turmoil resulting from an outer force where one partner opens a door to peace of some sort.
A deep thought has been expressed through a door as if it is alive. A beautiful philosophical poem shared nicely. Loved reading it.
In solitude I opened it And beckoned you. in solitude i open the doors now............ far away from u. there is mystical thoughts in your poem.... a mystery......... thank you for the nice feeling i get when i read you. tony
A beautiful expression of love. In solitude...i opened it. So poetically put.
A short and sweet poem! Loved reading this beautiful poem again!
Far away from you In solitude I opened it And beckoned you/// superb loving expression
During the cyclone When you and I In the open Endured its ferocity. I opened the door for you in silence and solitude..... experience of sufferings together that helps to open up the door of love. great thinking.. tony
A lovely poem! I liked the last stanza most.....Far away from you/In solitude/I opened it/And beckoned you...10
Very interesting poem inviting wide range of interpretations. Expresses so much in so few words.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
a profound write of unselfishness and love of another? .............superbly written