'Human Prayer' Poem by Annie Juliet

'Human Prayer'

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God please help me to pass
my exam;
please help me to clear
my arrears;
please help me to do
my masters;
please help me to get
my Best job;
please help me to get
my promotion (high pay):
please help me to get
my smart life partner;
please help me to give birth to
intelligent, smart kid;
please help me to get admission
in Best school;
................
God please help my kid to pass
his Exam...

we never stop asking..
we never wait for HIM..
we never be satisified with what we have...

Lets try to be more happy with what we have got already from HIM.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daniel Brick 13 September 2017

This poem has a wonderful twist when the voice asking for more and more and more is silenced and a new voice - calm, reverent, sincere - expresses not a list of demands but rather a quiet faith which is patient. There is a sweetness that I feel in these closing lines that makes waiting and patience very natural.

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Dr Antony Theodore 17 February 2016

we never stop asking.. we never wait for HIM.. we never be satisified with what we have... Lets try to be more happy with what we have got already from HIM. a beautiful vision and attitude towards prayer we shall be satisified with what we have..... we can aspire also but everything has a limit. thank you. tony

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we never stop asking.. we never wait for HIM.. we never be satisified with what we have..... nice lines...10 never lose line always feel fine but work hard and look forward

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* Stephen *king 06 February 2011

god help me to become superman cuz i want to fly and save people. :)

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Chitra - 08 December 2009

inner satisfaction is more important than happiness derived from external things..well written..the last line captures the essence of true happiness

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