Compromise Poem by Annie Juliet


Rating: 5.0

I killed my pride
For a smile on your face;
I hid my smile
For the comfort of your heart;
I controlled my heart
For your peace of mind;
I stopped thinking
For the happiness of yours;
I sacrificed my happiness
For your satisfaction in life;
I disregarded my satisfaction
For your joy;
I hated my joy
For your future;
I destroyed my future
To let you grow;
Giving my nutrition,
I see you grow tall -
Meanwhile 'I' was fading.
I gave 'myself' for 'you'....
Won't you tell that you love me? ? ?

Friday, November 20, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: compromise,sacrifice
Gajanan Mishra 20 November 2015

Pure love, true love, I love.. good one.

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Akhtar Jawad 18 September 2017

A woman making sacrfices for a compromise for long awaited words, I LOVE YOU. Topic is simple but the poetess has penned it in a style that is extra ordinary, amazing and attractive.

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Sofia Kioroglou 23 November 2015

Brilliant piece! I enjoyed reading it!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 21 November 2015

Giving nutrition and having compromise is very amazing definitely. Nicely penned poem shared.10

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Ratnakar Mandlik 20 November 2015

Sacrificing ones own interests and future as a compromise for getting love of the loved one is a natural option. However, sacrifice should not go in vain and the person must get love in return. Other wise.....! Nice verse and the thought of dejection after so much sacrifice is touching. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Laquory Jones 20 November 2015

I enjoyed it thanks for sharing

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