Humble Poem by Eddi Hong

Humble

Rating: 3.8


Meds became mad
People need someone sane
No they do not want to be saved
Instead, they lie to each other face
Protecting what is value for themselves

A single child is crying
No one care to help him from suffering
They keep busying
Posting every luxury living

While homeless need no majesty
only craving for someone to talk
side by side
with no lie

And while we aging
In future we regretting
For what have we been doing
We should just be thankful for everything

Monday, June 19, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: poems,poetess
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
There was a dark side from this writing.
Though I wanted to pour it into more lyrical, I hope people build more empathy for they surroundings.
Excuse me, if you feel these words not getting the point.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 07 April 2018

And while we aging In future we regretting For what have we been doing We should just be thankful for everything. facts and realities of life you have pictured dear poet. you have powerful observation.in you.. this is a gift of God.. thank u dear poet. tony

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Dr Antony Theodore 19 June 2017

A single child is crying No one care to help him from suffering They keep busying Posting every luxury living.. i got the sense that you are describing the modern life and the life of the suffering of the neglected child while the parents are pursuing their own luxuries......... i do not know whether i am write. thank you dear poet. tony

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Eddi Ang Hong 22 June 2017

Nothing wrong and right based on perceptions that we have. Thank you Dr. Tony for your concern. Good day

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Resh Kav 19 June 2017

now a days the human nature is like that, good poem

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Eddi Ang Hong 22 June 2017

That is why less people realize, empathy and sympathy is like a false while they acknowledge love. Thank you Raavi.

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Eddi Hong

Tanjung Balai, North Sumatera, Indonesia
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