Broken Lens Poem by Eddi Hong

Broken Lens

Rating: 5.0


A lot complicated expressions
never ending emotions
that people can't even comprehend
pushing life to edge for achievements

It becomes harder
as growing older
and thus forgetting something simple
that didn't have to be better

Life is not a competition
why do you have to beg for acceptance
even knowing that will drive to emptiness
all lost in a seconds of moment

making living sections
as if live by comment sections
years have seasons
even you don't know when is the apocalypse session

You begin to question
why you have to chase the perfection
You wonder
is it you or the second you that build the cooperation

is it fear or you taking the role
you don't know anymore

Thursday, August 16, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: life,poems,poetic expression,poetry,regret,sad
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Naila Rais 28 August 2018

A nice write. . . Keep it up.... 10 Naila

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Bernard F. Asuncion 17 August 2018

Eddi, such a well crafted poem...10+++

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Eddi Ang Hong 17 August 2018

Thank you, Sir Bernard. Hope you enjoyed it.

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Eddi Hong

Tanjung Balai, North Sumatera, Indonesia
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