Hungry Tide Poem by Moushumi moushumi

Hungry Tide

Rating: 5.0


Floating between earth and sea,
Striving apart from arctic asparagus,
Looking into the endless blues
In a way: floated, streamed and washed
In desperate look and dismay:
Another world create the house of jungle
Where my diminished face
Prolongs to stay in shambles;
Another monotone breaks the
Utter chagrin with soared smiles;




15th Dec2008

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Min Sia 29 December 2008

Fine imagery..lifted strong emotions..that makes this poem powerful... I love the title..really match with the message.. Thanks for sharing this..truly, amazing write...

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 28 December 2008

wow......really liked the poem, maam. it flows smoothly with the words, and creates magic with its rhythm. thank you very much.

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Kesav Easwaran 27 December 2008

strong emotions...good write...10

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Chitra - 27 December 2008

wonderful write to fill the emotional arrears. 10+

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Shymal Chakraborty 20 December 2008

Looking into the endless blue...... Asadharan.....beautiful...

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