Sunday, September 8, 2013

Hunter Comments

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With change of season
He too changes for good reason
Time over but he still sees a chance
Young girls get his furtive glance.
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Pradip Chattopadhyay
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Geetha Jayakumar 09 September 2013

Beautiful write, , , His mind goes hunting wild deer..Interesting poem.

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Valsa George 09 September 2013

Poor fellow! He never thinks that the young girls he is eyeing also will be seeking youthful, handsome guys and not a pathetic old clown in pantaloons! ! A very interesting read! !

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Dave Walker 08 September 2013

A great poem, we all change with age, some more than others.

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Anil Kumar Panda 08 September 2013

hahahaha.....this is very nice.with age his heart is seeking more and more love.a sort of perv.liked it.

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