Huntress Poem by Bryony Sheldon

Huntress



She stirs her coffee with the same spoon
That she cradles her foal in.
She's got a lucky feeling about this lightning colt
She'll back it- but deep down she knows she won't win.

On a cold November mourning she opens the case
Of her lethal, little gun.
She's going shooting, you see, she'll hunt something-
For after 5 cold months it's finally open season.

She's gone shooting again, and it's a relief;
Her itchy trigger finger was having cramps,
It was really nagging at her- but, oh, the irony-
Now she's gone and shot up the nag.

The Huntress tries to cover her tracks
As she cries in her filthy room.
The anxiety and fever burns her body all over-
But she just kills the pain with a Zippo and a spoon.

Tuesday, February 19, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: addiction,drugs,horse,needle,pain,self harm,shooting,warning
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Hate the first two lines- they were a bit too on the nose. Unfortunately I couldn't come up with a suitable replacement.

I was originally going to title this "Equestrian", however "Huntress" fits the metaphor of the middle two stanzas and I don't really know I guess it just sounds cooler? (Of course, there is nothing cool about heroin!)
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr. antony theodore 21 February 2019

The Huntress tries to cover her tracks As she cries in her filthy room. The anxiety and fever burns her body all over- But she just kills the pain with a Zippo and a spoon.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 19 February 2019

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