Hurt Room 666 Poem by Clarie Sweet

Hurt Room 666



We meet in hurt room 666 did I do right or did I mess up again who cares?

I don’t life is messed up who really cares I don’t I wouldn’t dare.

Screw it let every one fend for them selves, no one really cares why should I?

Taking chances, we meet in Hurt room 666 exclusive lessons on hating and hurting, it doesn’t really matter any more, so much for taking chances.

No one cares and no one can help they don’t know my life and they can’t change the way I am.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

i only stopped to read it cause it has my signature in the title, (666) .... i love it.... keep up the work.

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 11 April 2009

this has a sorrowful mood to it but ur words finely express it i like the title nice job

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Greenwolfe 1962 16 March 2009

I see a lot of pain expressed in this. Also, a lot of frustration. Probably because no one is listening or taking the time to show an interest in the suffering that is going on. The last line is the final clue. Somebody ask her what is wrong! I like the way this was presented by the writer. A success. GW62

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