Tiffany ThePirate

[hurt You] - Poem by Tiffany ThePirate

Looking back
I now realize
When i was hurting
I hurt others..

I try to tell myself
I didn't mean to
But i did..
At the time i wanted them to hurt

It was like
some kind of justice
Cruel and stupid
I regret it all now.

Im sorry to those i hurt
I very truly am
Please don't forgive me
I'm not the person you think i am.

I'll end up hurting you again
It's something i can't change
I'd rather you hate me
Then let me do this..Again.


Comments about [hurt You] by Tiffany ThePirate

  • (12/28/2009 6:06:00 PM)

    It's good to reveal the truth of your feelings - up to a point. But don't make the mistake of becoming stuck in self-flagellation. Allow yourself to be forgiven and learn from your past mistakes and you might be surprised by what happens. You have expressed your regret simply and poetically. Perhaps the very act of sharing your faults publicly will begin your transformation and infinite possibilities for further poems. Good luck. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ (Report) Reply

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  • (12/27/2009 12:50:00 PM)

    sometimes in the hurting spree you may not be able to distinguish the persons who deserve it. chances are there that you might hurt the wrong person too. so be careful dear poetess. (Report) Reply

  • (12/22/2009 5:24:00 AM)

    a nice poem here...well expressed! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • (12/22/2009 12:24:00 AM)

    What is hurt not best expressed when you need to know your soul is kept on motion sweeping east and west. Music to my ears if you pretend too depth you have no rest, you move on where is quiet crept, pull out the book, what are you death, you could not hurt that someone else expressed. If beauty you think it is you maybe as closely kept to wherever it is never the last breath (Report) Reply

  • John Knight (12/21/2009 4:31:00 PM)

    Hi Tiffany Angel - A well structured poem with a good linguistic content. As I read it the poem explores the dilemma of those who are being hurt hurting others in return (V 1) . The subject of the poem (is it autobiographical Tiff?) realises thais a 'knee jerk' raction and is sorry for what they have done but seems incapable of being able to stop their reaction (V 2,3,4) V 5 Leaves us with am unresolved dilemma. 'I'll end up hurting you again - It's something I can't change - I'd rather you hate me - Than let me do this...........Again. Well Tiff let's hope this issue is reolved. Love you in Poetry - JOHN. (Report) Reply

  • (12/21/2009 2:50:00 PM)

    Well written Tiff
    well express
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  • (12/21/2009 8:50:00 AM)

    The remorse and self infliction imbued with self pity is evident in the poem and somewhere the poet is seeking purification by inviting hate...well written. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, December 21, 2009

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