[hurt You] Poem by Tiffany ThePirate

The remorse and self infliction imbued with self pity is evident in the poem and somewhere the poet is seeking purification by inviting hate...well written.

It's good to reveal the truth of your feelings - up to a point. But don't make the mistake of becoming stuck in self-flagellation. Allow yourself to be forgiven and learn from your past mistakes and you might be surprised by what happens. You have expressed your regret simply and poetically. Perhaps the very act of sharing your faults publicly will begin your transformation and infinite possibilities for further poems. Good luck. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

sometimes in the hurting spree you may not be able to distinguish the persons who deserve it. chances are there that you might hurt the wrong person too. so be careful dear poetess.

a nice poem here...well expressed! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

What is hurt not best expressed when you need to know your soul is kept on motion sweeping east and west. Music to my ears if you pretend too depth you have no rest, you move on where is quiet crept, pull out the book, what are you death, you could not hurt that someone else expressed. If beauty you think it is you maybe as closely kept to wherever it is never the last breath

Well written Tiff well express