Tiffany ThePirate


Goodbye - Poem by Tiffany ThePirate

You read my message
You don't reply
What have i done?
Can you tell me why?

I know your busy
but you make time
for the rest
I am nothing..at best

Am i a bother?
Should i leave?
Just say one word
I can take it
I already see..

Just say 'Goodbye'
And i'll be gone
There would be no reason
to carry on

I won't stay where im not wanted
i just need to know
When you read my message
and don't reply
Is that because your saying goodbye?


11-28-09

**Sorry haven't posted poems in forever.


Comments about Goodbye by Tiffany ThePirate

  • (12/6/2009 11:42:00 PM)


    Nice poem shared...expressive one! ! ! (Report) Reply

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  • (12/6/2009 5:51:00 AM)


    Awwww...Be Tiffany good write (Report) Reply

  • (12/5/2009 3:50:00 PM)


    Well written Tiff, if a bit self-indulgent. Fondly, Jerry (Report) Reply

  • (12/5/2009 9:10:00 AM)


    a request needs the answer feel frustration in your words 10 (Report) Reply

  • John Knight (12/5/2009 8:48:00 AM)


    Hi Tiffany - You wrote and so i am replying. We all feel sometimes like you do in your fiesty poem - I can see why they call you the Pirate. But I love you Angel - I have read your poem - I have commented and I have scored (TEN - because you are worth it!)) - what more can I do? Love you in poetry - JOHN (Report) Reply

  • (12/5/2009 8:34:00 AM)


    very well written and the way you make a request sound so powtic is magic....thank you Tiffany ~^..^ (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, December 5, 2009



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