Friday, May 2, 2014

Husband Comments

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Where did you go
When you left that day
Do you know I'm still crying
Do you know I still pray
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Donna Saphier
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Chinedu Dike 08 September 2019

Very heartfelt with touching expressions. Deep feelings passionately brought forth with strong emotions. Thanks for sharing.

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Donna Saphier 11 January 2017

Thank-you for reading xx 😋

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Elena Plotkin 06 May 2014

I'm truly sorry for your loss. Your poem is both great and heart-wrenching. When you spend a lifetime building dreams together it's scary and tough to start dreaming alone. However, living in the past no matter how great it may seem is like being the living dead. To truly live one has to look to the future. You'll get there one day and your husband's memory will not suffer when you do. God Bless and keep writing. You are truly talented.

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Suburban Lovechild 05 May 2014

Yes, very heartfelt, emotion dripping on every line...

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Valerie Dohren 02 May 2014

Lost my husband too 8 months ago, so can very much relate. Sad and heartfelt poem.

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Donna Saphier

Donna Saphier

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