Tuesday, November 15, 2005
Hush... And Listen To Love's Sound (Or Dancing In The Shadows) Comments
Rating: ★5.0
you call to me across the miles
night winds carry the whispers
floating on the breeze
through my windows
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Eila Mahima Jaipaul
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15 November 2005
Eila, I love this but, I feel you could cut the last stanza. I feel now is a fine line to finish on. It's your poem so take no notice of me. Love is definitely something we feel and transcends all boundaries in my book. 10 from hopelessly romantic Tai
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1/16/2026 6:33:12 PM # 1.0.0
I am not sure I disagree... though I like the distance and destiny lines in the last stanza... cutting it would make it neat and compact though... hmmm....