Friday, September 2, 2005

Hypnotized With Desire Comments

Rating: 4.6

When you turn to walk away,
I feel like a lonely high school boy
Returning to an empty home
On a soap-opera afternoon;
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Uriah Hamilton
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Shannon Chapel 29 December 2005

Uriah, Whew! Holy smokes! As a woman I can tell you that if you talk to her (the object of your desire) like this you have absolutely nothing to worry about. She's yours! Trust me on this one! lol S

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Jesus Christ, Uriah! Ask her out already! ! ! !

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A Harrie 02 September 2005

a captivating write, I felt every line. Brilliant.

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Theorem Thetruthserum 02 September 2005

Uriah...wonderful poem so I had to give it a ten. You conveyed many great emotions in this one.

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Enemacles Redux 02 September 2005

Great stuff... especially the first imaginative stanza!

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Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari 02 September 2005

Very real....beautifully written....

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