Ari Alsio

I 030 - Poem by Ari Alsio

my soul was light red
spring; color in the heart
she left on the rocks

Topic(s) of this poem: love

Form: Haiku

Comments about I 030 by Ari Alsio

  • Shakil Ahmed (11/16/2015 5:51:00 AM)

    you have presented your thoughts nicely with a few words, thansks (Report) Reply

    Ari Alsio (11/16/2015 6:01:00 AM)

    Tightly expressed thing remains the core, thank you my friend.

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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (11/16/2015 5:27:00 AM)

    So deeply envisioned and nicely presented. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

    Ari Alsio (11/16/2015 6:03:00 AM)

    Thank you my brother.

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Poem Submitted: Monday, November 16, 2015

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