I Am Falling Down. Poem by Dr vinisha Gupta

I Am Falling Down.

Rating: 3.5


I m Falling down a big hill,
Down bad people r there to kill.
I wish somebody could save me,
But for it I have to pay a big fee.

I wish somebody could hold my hand,
Any teacher, Any relative, Any friend.
No one is there,
I m alone.
I m sad here,
Paying my life's lone.

Every-time I look down,
The height scars me,
Up I see my beautiful TOWN,
Down a DIRTY SEA.

And up they wave there hands saying 'GOODBYE',
Down bad people r there to say 'hi'.

Soon I realize that 'Hill' was the MISTAKES I made,
But now I know it's too late.
I can never go back,
I want to cut my neck.

I don't know what to do,
I wanna tell u Ma'am,
I still trust you.

In the mid-falling way,
I still feel you r there for help,
As you as ways say,
'History Repeats Itself.......'
(i think u will again come for help as u came in past)

Wednesday, December 6, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: depression
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bharati Nayak 07 December 2017

Powerful expression of depressing thoughts.You are on the right track when you release your emotions through poems.The first sign of repentance is when you realise that what you did was a mistake.But guilty feelings should not over power you..You should realise that there may not be good people around you always to bring you to the right track.You have to rediscover your stronger self with in you and motivate yourself.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 06 December 2017

History repeats itself, true..I feel an elegant tone in your poem .........10

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Abhimanyu Kumar.s 06 December 2017

Powerful expression of emotions. Too deep.

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Gajanan Mishra 06 December 2017

for help you are there, it is the truth, it is love

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