I Am Falling Down. Comments

Powerful expression of depressing thoughts.You are on the right track when you release your emotions through poems.The first sign of repentance is when you realise that what you did was a mistake.But guilty feelings should not over power you..You should realise that there may not be good people around you always to bring you to the right track.You have to rediscover your stronger self with in you and motivate yourself.

History repeats itself, true..I feel an elegant tone in your poem .........10

Powerful expression of emotions. Too deep.

for help you are there, it is the truth, it is love