I Am Going To Return Poem by me poet yeps poet

I Am Going To Return

Rating: 5.0


YOU ARE EXCEPTIONAL

TRANSLUCENT

I WRITE WITH MY FINGER
ON THE SAND

ALL WASHES AWAY
HAND IN HAND

NEITHER ME NOR MY HAND

ONLY REMAINS IS SAND
SAND AND ONLY SAND
MY ASHES MERGE
IT'S GRAND

Monday, May 10, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: hope,life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
MAHTAB BANGALEE 12 May 2021

Finger draws on the sand the heart of writings; it's not words, it's silent love

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Sylvia Frances Chan 11 May 2021

Excellent rhythm and good song for walking along the sand, exuberant tunes, I have enjoyed very much these rhyming lines, well excecuted!

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ME POET YEPS POET 10 May 2021

ME POET YEPS ALWAYS A POET ADMIRES ALL THOSE INSPIRE M.A.N

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M Asim Nehal 10 May 2021

The journey is fascinating and the slip of sand from the hand is amusing in all ways. Profound poem.5*******

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me poet yeps poet 10 May 2021

LIFE ARISES FROM SANDY SHORES then it merges as it was there ever before no less no more

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