YOU ARE EXCEPTIONAL
TRANSLUCENT
I WRITE WITH MY FINGER
ON THE SAND
ALL WASHES AWAY
HAND IN HAND
NEITHER ME NOR MY HAND
ONLY REMAINS IS SAND
SAND AND ONLY SAND
MY ASHES MERGE
IT'S GRAND
Excellent rhythm and good song for walking along the sand, exuberant tunes, I have enjoyed very much these rhyming lines, well excecuted!
The journey is fascinating and the slip of sand from the hand is amusing in all ways. Profound poem.5*******
LIFE ARISES FROM SANDY SHORES then it merges as it was there ever before no less no more
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Finger draws on the sand the heart of writings; it's not words, it's silent love