I Am Hustle Poem by Wale Smyle

The Y boy sitting next to the computer striking and clicking keys day and night hoping for the hayday i think you want to use heyday, not hayday: The practical girl waiting along the high way like an hitchhiker .....here in u.s. i would write highway.... one word - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - FROM ONLINE SITE: hey·day 'ha?da/ noun noun: heyday; plural noun: heydays 1. the period of a person's or thing's greatest success, popularity, or vigor. the paper has lost millions of readers since its heyday in 1964 synonyms: prime, peak, height, pinnacle, summit, apex, acme, zenith, climax, high point; More day, time, bloom, flowering; prime of life, salad days, halcyon days, glory days during his heyday, he was quite the matinee idol Origin late 16th cent. (denoting good spirits or passion) : from archaic heyday! , an exclamation of joy, surprise, etc. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - The words of a young writer longing to be publish..............i would write longing to be published OR longing to publish [[ i'm only offering suggestions from my point of view ]] I hustle because life is tussle.............i've rarely dealt with the word tussle and it didn't sound 'right' to me. i guess i thought a tussle was not so tough, but i looked up its definition and find that it fits very well in your poem. BUT i would put a tussle instead of tussle. i have sometimes left out little words [like a] in my poems but then added the little words because [for some reason] the line(s) sound better after adding the little word(s) . it was interesting that you switched from using I am hustle to I am a hustler. i think i get it. i like the message and the way you expressed it. is the girl waiting along the high way a prostitute, hustling for business? i have never hustled, in any way. i guess i have been fortunate to get by. it's not that i haven't been conscientious, mind you! thanks for sharing. i hope any (legal?) hustling you do pays off. i hope YOU get your heyday. bri :)

'the dream waiting to flourish, i am a hustler, i hustle because life is a tussle..' wonderful rhyme on this poem Wale...